Bitesize Writing: Bitesize見本帖　！フォーラムと同じ内容です

Ms.mikanさんの投稿 からヒントを得て、
Bitesize＝1~3 までのwriting をわたし自身がやって、
ずらっと並べてみようと考えました。Bitesize Writing / Speaking なんて
世の中のだれも言ってないことですからね、
「ああ、なんとなく分かってきた」と思ってもらうには、自分で汗をかかなきゃ。じゃ、やってみましょうか・・・

ms.mikanさんはわたしがテンサクしたうち、三つの文に注目したのでした。
どれも「借りる・盗む・真似する」を実際にやってみた文だった。

で、とっても上から目線でしたが、ms.mikanさんに向かって
「お目が高い」などとのたまわってしまい、それが気になって何度か思い出す
うちに、そうか、「借りる・盗む・真似する」を実行した文をそうやって
見分けてもらえるなら、全文「借りる・盗む・真似する」でテンサクしたものを
見本として見てもらえるかもしれない、となったわけです。

では・・・

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I made a trip to another 秘湯 with my husband.

This time it was to 那須温泉・大丸温泉旅館（おおまる）in Tochigi Pref.

First we took Tohoku Shinkansen to 那須高原.

Then we had a ride on a local bus for about an hour.

There was a car waiting for us at the last stop.

It took us to the inn in five minutes.

It sat at 1300m high in deep mountains.

It was more than two hundred years old.

I hear General Nogi and his wife often stayed there.

The inn had a long history.

It also boasted several open-air baths.

The Shirato River ran behind the inn.

Hot springs rushed into the river directly.

The river was dammed to make open-air baths.

One problem, though, was that they were for mixed bathing.

Luckily you were allowed to wrap yourself in a towel.

I had a go at it.

I saw nothing but the forest around us.

Cool breeze and pure hot water refreshed me like nothing else.

I had a good rest the whole day long, soaking in hot springs.

Life is short.

Who can stop our visiting another one?

So, next hito, here we come!

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どこまで「借りる・盗む・真似する」が成功したか分かりませんが、
Bitesize＝3 を越えると「借りる・盗む・真似する」が大事な指針になると
思われます。

「借りる・盗む・真似する」って、実はうまく行くと気持ちのいいもの
なのですよ。スピード感もリズムもあって、その上場面にピタッとはまって。